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Hey, this is for you I finally got it scanned^^ It looks a lot better in real life (the scanner made the sword look like crap). Yeah, I got it up, though..finally.

Edit: Well, a few of you saw it with the kind of weird black and white stuff. I liked the design at first, but the more I looked at it, the more I realised how much I hated it. So yeah, I got rid of it. I might put in the black background later, like I had originally planned.
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:iconpaladin343:
Paladin343 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
sweeeeeeeet... :clap: I love the eyes.
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:iconkuroinami:
kuroinami Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, thanks. I used gel pens on those, I hoped they looked okay...
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:iconpaladin343:
Paladin343 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
It adds the realistic look, because not many people's irises are solid color. I know mine aren't.
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Aye, well I wanted to make it so that his eyes could really be any color and every color.
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Paladin343 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
ah...
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LadyShadowblade Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2006
Very nice, I like the design on the blade.
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:iconkuroinami:
kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks^^
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:iconelmanta:
ElManta Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2006
Even though u say the sword look like crap, it is so much better then I ever could make it....but whos eyes is it?
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:iconkuroinami:
kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
The eyes belong to No One, a character of 's.
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:iconelmanta:
ElManta Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2006
k ^^
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angry-grr13 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006
interesting very interesting indead
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:iconkuroinami:
kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks^^
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angry-grr13 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2006
welcome
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
I have to ask you this. Is that sword your own creation? I didn't say anything about that in my story did I? I don't think I did.....Noone has a black bladed sword with gold veins in it!.....okay, I'm kind of trying to figure out if I ever told you that...did I?

P.S. Thank you for posting this! I love seeing other people do something with my work! Now i have to get that crossover done.....*goes away to sulk*....I will work on it tomorrow, I swear! Since I haven't been able to, here's a little preview


*****spoilers*******spoilers******lol********



The dark wings of the forest trees enshrouded her. Shadows rippled in her wake. Ebbing. Fading. Growing as would a rising tide on an early morning breeze. As a man mght have his shadow of darkness, so she might have her shade in passing; frantic swirls and soft cascades of dew from the undisturbed branches. The small, crystal spheres never met the ground. The forest seemed to greet her. To call her in. To accept her gift and wecome her passage.


*****end*******

I know that's not much, it's the opening paragraph though,......
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
No dear, I'm psycic.

Actually you did tell me about it. Or should I say, showed me an exerpt. One part of it described the sword a little, basically only the blade, the hilt I had to use my imagination. Another part of that same exerpt said he had different kinds of eyes, so I decided to give him the eyes of every man and leave it at that.
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
hehehe....I really don't remember that.....oh, what, there it is! *brain kicks in* That's right. I sent you my excerpt from Beck's Guard, the one from the chapter I haven't posted yet.....suddenly I feel a little stupid......lol.....not that bad, but, anyway.....

Is being psychic one of your lycanthropic gifts?....
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Lmao

And its not really psychic per say, its more like abnormally perseptive. And that comes from being part earth elemental, not lycanthropy, though they can seem close, at times^^
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, you have only just been infected, I see. So at the moment you are only unusually perceptive, you will need a few more months for it to become a psychic gift.
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
*blinks* I guess..though sometimes I doubt it...
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe....lol....I don't think I would want to be psychic....to much looking into people minds.....people have dirty minds.....
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Reading other peole's minds isn't being psycic, its being telepathic, and I have a tendancy to do that too.
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nekojewlz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006
OOohhh.... Nice sword design. Who's that in the backround?
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
That would be No One, one of 's characters.
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nekojewlz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006
Cool!!!
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:iconkuroinami:
kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I think so^^
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DragonScholar Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006
A good job. I think you're pushing yourself with this piece - keep it up!
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
heh, compared with the art you saw from me earlier, yes. You should really see Raging Water Characters, though (its the selected deviation on my home page) its a lot better than this one (though not colored...)
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dumahdie Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the sword is cool, don't bog yourself down :K i wish i could color eyes like that~they look awesome
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
It looks a lot better in real life, the gel pens didn't transfer onto the computer the way that I had hoped they would...

And eyes arn't that hard to do, if you look at it carefully.
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dumahdie Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe, yep. same thing with my comic pages...ah well, it's a'ight anyway.
sure they are :P
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
I hate scanners..especially mine.
Go look at the close up, you'll see.
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dumahdie Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmm...i don't think mine does that
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dumahdie Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i dunno...*blank face*
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
does what?
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Kismet-Neko Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006
Very nice, I like the colouration of the eyes. And the design of the sword is just spiff.
Since it asks for critique, I feel I must oblige, please forgive me if I offend. The white streak on the sword...if it is meant to be a highlight...is a bit...too stark of a contrast. You may want to work on making things seem more metallic, go from dark to medium, to white, then to medium and then to dark again...it tends to give it the feel of steel a bit more. The handle could use some shading...to make it more 3-D, try adding shadows to the sides and a bit of a highlight to the front of it, not to say make a white streak down it, try the same thing I mentioned with the sword, the gradual progression from dark to light. The eyes are good, however, they look to be opened as wide as possible, with no trace of eyelids...perhaps a line to indicate the eyelid would make them seem more realistic, nothing too noticeable, preferably light and not too high of a distance from the eye.
Well, that is the end of my crit. Please ignore if you dislike, my art is total pants and thus I've really no right to give you advice, but, eh.
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Blah, no you are right.

Actually, the streak is a weird reflection, and it looks SO much better in real life. My scanner really screwed it up. Actually it screwed most of the drawing up. I colored the majority of this with glitter gel pens, so thats why there isn't shading, I didn't need it with the coloring, at least I didn't need it in RL...
Originally I had planned to color the whole thing black, except for the eyes and the sword, but since I saw how long it was going to take, I went the route you see on the screen. And I don't knw, he probably does have his eyes open as wide as possible.
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