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Ere the day sets
They rise up
Upon the wind
Flying with new grown wings
To a place we cannot see

We, left behind,
Have but the old shells
Molted skins
Of flesh and bone
Nothing inside; nobody home
A responce to what I took away from 's Nobody's Home. Yes, I did go back and read the original (his was a responce as well), but mine's responding to what I saw in his writing.

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:iconlawren:
Lawren Dec 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
So..does anyone else want to take up the torch and write a reply to a reply?


Que me in and I'll see what I can do...
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Lawren Dec 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, sweet indeed... like chocolate...
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kuroinami Dec 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
lol, sweet.
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:iconss4sascha:
-looks around-....empty.
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kuroinami Oct 6, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed.
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:iconss4sascha:
please respond to my notes....
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platinummyr Oct 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
yay! AND THE PATH GOES ON!!! :hug: Thankies :p It's well written, Kuro!
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kuroinami Oct 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
lol, thanks. So..does anyone else want to take up the torch and write a reply to a reply?
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platinummyr Oct 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
that would rock!
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kuroinami Oct 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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