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It was one of the happiest times in Kiyune’s entire life.  The landscape spread out before in a never ending carpet of flowers, and even if there was no water to be seen, just so many flowers, so much color, so much life and energy, made her happy just to be a part of it.  Around and around she spun, letting the joy flow through her entire being.  And then Rain was beside her, and the two of them through flowers at one another, and in the afternoon sun it looked like gold that they were throwing.  As they played, Kiyune sensed another force, but never once did she think it was anything but friendly.  She ran into Mesiyeru’s open arms, Rain following close behind, but staying far enough back that Kiyune had a moment with Mesiyeru to herself.  There the water witch and the necromancer kissed.

The instant their lips touched, everything around them went dark.  Rain disappeared without a sound, but Kiyune instantly felt her absence.  And as Kiyune turned to call for the girl, Mesiyeru disappeared from beneath her fingers.  She turned and she was alone.
Just a short little blurb. It will probably be expanded when it is worked into the story. But I just didn't want you all to think that I had given up on Raging Water. On the contrary, it is hard to consentrate on What in Blue Blazes?! with them clammoring for attention!
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DarkOfThree Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2007
:( I liked it, yes...yet all the happiness in the world can be stolen away in one moment of despair. I think that that, most of all, can destroy more completely than anything...
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
I know...
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TakJak Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's all happy and delightful and kawaii and then...I got a blank. Good thing it wasn't just me. That's some serious mood/tone in there. :)
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, well you all have to listen to the music I was listening to when I wrote it. It goes dirrectly from a happy song into a creepy one. Anyways, I think she's going to wake up stressed, and do something stupid.
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TakJak Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
....Spoiler?
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Mm..I guess. She's going to wander outside to the river to think and be ambushed.
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TakJak Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well...that sucks. Never can get a moment's peace.
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, nope, not in my books...
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TakJak Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, neither can Kairo or Tak, I suppose.
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
lol, yeah
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting... lol :p I really SHOULD read your story.. but TIME!!!!

Time is a valuable thing
Watch it fly by as the pendulum swings
Watch it count down to the end of the day
The clock ticks life away
It's so unreal
Didn't look out below
Watch the time go right out the window

"In the End" by Linkin Park...

That fits me right now XD
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
So..read a chapter a day. Or even a chapter a week.
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
lol, I'm reading SEVERAL stories a day XD I mean.. I watch 50 something people, and read about 10 stories... and more It's crazy!
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
And you're telling me that you couldn't fit one more story into that schedual? *gives you puppy eyes*
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
might be able to XD :O We'll see :p
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Oh please do *more puppy eyes*
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
lol :p
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Havoc892 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2007
As you would say: "Awww... :3"

Blurbs like this can be a blast to write. I should post some. And if you like writing little blurbs like this, do more.

-Havoc
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:p

Lol, you have no idea how many little blurbs I have written. The trick is getting them into chapters. Actually, it really isn't that hard, they usually tell me where they want to go...
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Havoc892 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007
That's very good actually. Means you can write an 'author's edition' with all the stuff that got left out!

-Havoc
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Er..I actually have yet to leave anything out^^; It has all gotten worked in somehow or another...
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Havoc892 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2007
Ah.

-Havoc
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
^^;
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Havoc892 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007
Well, what I'd suggest is go through and take out the things you do not need. You can always add them in later, if you need more material. I do know some publishers won't take huge works, because they're just too big. This is a problem I'm running into with The Jade Phoenix.

-Havoc
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
But I don't want to take anything out T.T I think that I need most everything that I have right now...
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