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Fuck meYou took too much pleasure in rejecting me
Had you stuck around and enabled my fantasies,
Had you had some semblance of faith in me,
You would have understood it's only a matter of time

The love I find will be eternal
She will understand my worth
Her perspective will allow her
Insight the others will wish they had

She will know if there was a wait
I was worth it
She will know at my worst
I was better than anyone else

My family will wish they were kind
My acquaintances will wish they were my friends
My crushes will wish they were my lovers

When it happens and I am stable and alone
When everyone in my life is, to me, what I chose

Inside My mother always told me, as I’m sure yours at some point did, that videogames are both useless and worthless. Throughout the years I’ve come to know all possible things a mother could say to her child about videogames: that they make you violent, that they empty your brain, and the eventual claim that it is the Devil’s work. I don’t know about you, but I’ve heard comment and phrase that seeks to criticize videogames; I have heard everything from everyone but listened to no one; if no one but me could understand my fixation for videogames it was their problem, not mine. Although, as it is normal on most mothers, mine didn’t want me to be happy. She didn’t hesitate when it came to forbid me playing; she used to switch the lights off, didn’t pay the internet bill for over six months (I took advantage of her need of internet for work purposes so she would pay it again), refused to give me any money, any at all, not even for tra

RemedyJump out of the cosmic puddle
Into another lake of stolen desire and rotting dreams

It may smell like flowers and all things pink
But the death permeates the shading and notes

Jump out of the sweetened mind
Into another thought of stolen desire and rotting dreams

It will smell like candy and butterflies
But the hate permeates the wings and the tongues

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I am Safe

by ~kuroinami, Sep 24, 2005, 9:20:32 PM
Literature / Poetry / Horror / Urban & Spoken Word

I am alone
Upon the throne.
Door locked.
Peace.

Steps outside the door
Soft and stealthy
Creek, creek, creek.
They go up the stairs.

Overhead a cry
suprise, fright
Pounding feet
Down the stairs

The nob jiggles,
Pounding, pounding, pounding,
A terrible scream.

I am safe, nothing can touch me.
Blood runs under the door.

I am Safeby ~kuroinami

Literature / Poetry / Horror / Urban & Spoken Word

Not my best poetry to be sure, but this piece was begging to be written, so thats what I did. I can't deny a begging piece of work.

~Paladin343 Nov 22, 2006 Hobbyist General Artist

creepy, but interesting.

~kuroinami Nov 23, 2006 Hobbyist Writer

Heh

Yeah, its a weird little poem..

~Paladin343 Nov 23, 2006 Hobbyist General Artist

sometimes that happens.

~kuroinami Nov 24, 2006 Hobbyist Writer

I suppose

~gifts-raemanzu Sep 28, 2005 Student Writer

Wow, this is great! I like the whole feel behind this, really great, and a very simple but cool story.

~kuroinami Sep 29, 2005 Hobbyist Writer

lol, thank you^^

~Omnicontemplation Sep 27, 2005

Well, first thing I noticed... creak is spelled with an a when used onomatopoeically, also, in both uses of the triple word, I think periods might help you drive it in a bit more, rather than commas... typo in surprise, it's missing an r... ...knob has a k on the beginning

... good job, all in all... scary poem though, as far as content.

~kuroinami Sep 27, 2005 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you for the comments, they are much appreciated.

~Omnicontemplation Sep 27, 2005

np.

*TakJak Sep 26, 2005 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

*throws head back and laughs maniacally* i wish i was the one who wrote this...*jealous*

sweet stuff, punk n_~

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