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How much do I love you by ~kuroinami:iconkuroinami:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Spoken Word


How much do I love you?

I love you so much that I'll explain the homework again
Even when I've already explained it twice

I love you so much that I'll keep your secrets
Even when I wish I could tell

I love you so much that I'll be nice to you
Even when you're annoying, and I'm feeling bad

I love you so much that I'll take your teasing
Even when it hurts so bad I could cry

I love you so much that I'd do anything for you
Even if that anything risks my life

I love you so much that  I'll support you in everything
Even when that everything entails another girl

I love you so much that I'll never tell
So that you won't have to tell me you don't

That's how much I love you.
©2006-2008 ~kuroinami
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Inspired by my ongoing one sided feelings for a guy I know. He will never know how he is, even if he somehow were to come across this poem. Anyways.
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~LadyShadowblade:iconLadyShadowblade: Jan 29, 2006, 6:45:47 PM
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Wow. This was such a sad piece. It shows the paradox that is love (at least of the unrequited nature) to a tee. Well done.
:sigh: I'm sorry you're feeling this way. This is the hardest part. but the good news is that it won't last, and a guy worthy of your affections will come along.

--
Embrace the beauty in the darkness, embrace the darkness within yourself, embrace the beauty within yourself. It is our birthright.
~kuroinami:iconkuroinami: Jan 29, 2006, 8:45:38 PM
Thanks, I'm sure that next year will be different, since I will be going to college. Or at least, I hope next year will be different...

And I've already kind of given up hope, at least with this guy. I'll never be more than a friend, of that I am sure.

--
This is goodnight, and not goodbye.
~Tyler's Funeral

Perceval: Courageous knight, moral paragon, easily distracted by shiney things

Robots vs. Zombies. That would make a great spectator sport!
~lahere:iconlahere: Jan 30, 2006, 10:34:03 AM
aww thats so sad. I know how it feels :hug:
The fourth stanza has to be my fav and the sixth stanza *shakes head&* been through that too many times. I hope it works out for you. Ans I like how this is a poem many could relate to :)
~kuroinami:iconkuroinami: Jan 30, 2006, 8:01:36 PM
Thanks. And I'm sorry that you too had/have to go through this.
I don't think it is going to work out, but its okay. Next year there will be many more fish in the pond, I'm going to college.

--
This is goodnight, and not goodbye.
~Tyler's Funeral

Perceval: Courageous knight, moral paragon, easily distracted by shiney things

Robots vs. Zombies. That would make a great spectator sport!
~LadyShadowblade:iconLadyShadowblade: Feb 1, 2006, 5:50:07 PM
Hun, when you go to college you are going to be surrounded by plenty of good looking, intelligent charming young men.
As for this guy, if he isn't interested...his loss.

--
Embrace the beauty in the darkness, embrace the darkness within yourself, embrace the beauty within yourself. It is our birthright.
~kuroinami:iconkuroinami: Feb 1, 2006, 5:51:56 PM
lol, thanks.
*sighs* I just wish college would come sooner, so that I didn't have to sit next to him...

--
This is goodnight, and not goodbye.
~Tyler's Funeral

Perceval: Courageous knight, moral paragon, easily distracted by shiney things

Robots vs. Zombies. That would make a great spectator sport!
~LadyShadowblade:iconLadyShadowblade: Feb 1, 2006, 5:58:33 PM
It'll be here sooner than you think, I promise.

--
Embrace the beauty in the darkness, embrace the darkness within yourself, embrace the beauty within yourself. It is our birthright.
~kuroinami:iconkuroinami: Feb 1, 2006, 6:15:36 PM
heh, I certainly hope so, senior year is killing me.

--
This is goodnight, and not goodbye.
~Tyler's Funeral

Perceval: Courageous knight, moral paragon, easily distracted by shiney things

Robots vs. Zombies. That would make a great spectator sport!
~TakJak:iconTakJak: Feb 3, 2006, 5:22:59 PM
that's so cute...but sad...

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...Well, it made sense at the time.
~kuroinami:iconkuroinami: Feb 3, 2006, 9:11:29 PM
I'm begining to dislike love, especially on Singles Awarenes Da-I mean Valentine's Day...

--
This is goodnight, and not goodbye.
~Tyler's Funeral

Perceval: Courageous knight, moral paragon, easily distracted by shiney things

Robots vs. Zombies. That would make a great spectator sport!
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