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White softness abounds
Serenity and beauty
Dashed across your face
Once again a warning to those who don't like Haiku. Take cover! Hai, I have taken another stab at Haiku and am rather pleased with the results. This was originally sent to with her "present" (and yes every one is personalized in some way or another.) Anywho, I thought you might like this, so here it is
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Short. vivid. I might like this....haiku
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed, that is what Haiku is all about. Getting the maximum message across in the least number of words.
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Well, you have succeeded excellently.
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
lol, well thank you^^
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Your Welcome,
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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Lawren Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh!!!!!
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
XD Thanks you make me feel so good about myself...
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lahere Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
this thing I love about Haiku's is that they can lead to more...this is a great haiku :)
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kuroinami Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I hope that I got the maximum effect across with a minimal amount of actual writing^^
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